Thursday, August 27, 2009
Johnston Post 2 (Response to Emma)
I agree with most of the things that Emma said, except when she mentioned something like "only so many things can happen in the middle of the ocean." I guess it's true that more things can happen on land than on the ocean, but I don't think that the author included the hurricane and tracked its progress with so much detail just because there weren't many other things to include in the story.
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I can see how what she wrote didn't come across well, but I think she clarified it a bit in class today. I get her point now.
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