To Tommy's post:
Tommy, I completely agree with your thoughts. All of the events that you mentioned definitely make the reader anticipate what will happen later. I'm not sure if you missed this or it was just a mistake with the page numbers, but on page 31, flocks of terns also fly by with "mournful cries," showing something is wrong.
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Nice point, Paul
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